Friday, October 28, 2011

Open Prompt


2004, Form B. The most important themes in literature are sometimes developed in scenes in which a death or deaths take place. Choose a novel or play and write a well-organized essay in which you show how a specific death scene helps to illuminate the meaning of the work as a whole. Avoid mere plot summary.


                  “Death is a natural part of life” is a clichéd phrase recognized since the dawn of the search for greater human understanding. However, in plays such as “Romeo and Juliet,” death goes beyond serving its core function and hints at its possible manifestations and effects in the context of the play. In “Romeo and Juliet,” the scene of the death of Romeo and Juliet points to how the play as a whole is reflective of the internal conflict that exposes itself externally in the form of hopelessness and also references the consistently present worldly message of standing strong in the face of opposition and advocating for one’s own control over one’s life and choices.

            The death of Romeo and Juliet, an end result of the priest’s efforts to reunite the two lovers, was caused due to an intricate plot to feign the death of Juliet in an attempt to forever untie the two star-crossed lovers. The futility and desperateness was clearly reflective in the death scene where Juliet held the already dead Romeo in her arms and lamented the passing away of her true love. The discouragement that Juliet experienced was immense, an emotion that manifested itself to directly portray how the friction between the two houses led to the eventual death of the two lovers. Despite of Romeo and Juliet’s persistent efforts to live together forever, the conflict between the two houses was too great and deep-rooted to move their families enough to accept the pair of lovers with open arms. Furthermore, the consequent death of Juliet after Romeo references the hopelessness of their attempts to convince their families. Despite of working tirelessly, Romeo and Juliet were never able to reconvene these to enemies of old in order to allow for the ever-lasting presence of their love.

            Beyond the context of the play, the death scene of Romeo and Juliet serves a critical function to apply the theme globally. I feel that Shakespeare intended to use this play as a basis for applying the concept of initiative, confidence, and belief emanating from one’s self. Through the death scene, a reader can obtain a perspective on how the root cause of the death of these two lovers was their inability to stand strong in the face of opposition. Applying it to the modern world, Shakespeare is trying to convey how it is essential to advocate for one’s choices in order to establish a sense of satisfaction in life rather than pass away with regrets in your heart. With the freedoms that we possess today, it would be easier for us to root for our opinions than it was for Romeo and Juliet. The only thing we need is a passionate purpose in mind to drive us towards our distinct goals without concern for society’s restraints. In the face of discouragement and limits on one’s choices, we can progress forward confidently to achieve fulfillment and prosperity in life. 

4 comments:

  1. Your question is one that applies very well to the piece Romeo and Juliet. I feel that your intro is very strong, the thesis is very broad and covers all aspects of what you discuss later which is very effective. However your use of cliche phrase, though you noted it was cliche, is still a broad statement that Ms. HOlmes frowns upon. The significance of the death scene is something that you very describe very well and give a lot of evidence for. I think it is interesting how you connect it into the modern world. If this isn't part of the actual question I must say bravo because you are clearly taking your response to the next level. I feel that maybe some of the parts of your thesis are emphasized more heavily than others, so the only recommendation I can make is to ensure that all aspects of your thesis are fully explained and developed. Though all of them are, a few are lacking when compared to the analysis of others.

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  2. What are you saying is death's "core function" in the first paragraph?

    I really like your essay, you connect the thesis very well to all of your paragraphs. I think the last sentence of your second paragraph could be said a little clearer. You could say something like, "Despite working tirelessly, Romeo and Juliet were never able to bring their families together, and act which would have cemented the presence of their love".

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  3. This prompt is perfect for Romeo and Juliet. You have a very strong thesis that ties very well into the rest of your paragraphs.

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  4. This essay was well structured, but i would be careful about some of the language you use in discussing Romeo and Juliet's love. Is it really an eternal, pure, REAL, love that runs its course in less than a week, shortly after Romeo declared his undying love for another woman? remember the famous lines that “These violent delights have violent ends, And in their triumph die, like fire and powder, Which, as they kiss, consume". You are correct in noting that death plays a key role in the play, so it would work for this prompt, but you may want to re-evaluate your arguments, which might convince an AP reader of a flawed understanding of the play.

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