Sunday, September 18, 2011

Open Prompt

1990. Choose a novel or play that depicts a conflict between a parent (or a parental figure) and a son or daughter. Write an essay in which you analyze the sources of the conflict and explain how the conflict contributes to the meaning of the work. Avoid plot summary.


          "We only do the things we do and give you advise about life because we care for you." This clichéd statement often quoted by parents, however may be true in the real world, is clearly not the case in Mark Twain's The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. The conflict between father and son is cleverly presented in the novel by Twain in order to portray the apathy and instability of Pap leading to the development of Huck into a self-sufficient, responsible, and mature individual who alludes to the result of lack of familial ties contributing to his abnormal transition from childhood to adolescence.

          Raised by a respectable family, Huck is under the care of two women who put their best efforts at work in order to change Huck into a civilized member of society. Despite of their efforts, Huck is reluctant to change his self and assimilate into the ways of "normal" society, a rebellious quality often visible in young children. In my opinion, Huck's father, called "Pap" in the novel by Huck, has had a lasting influence on Huck by indirectly referring to a savage and free life as a dream come true, often overpowering Huck and forcing him to believe in and live with his ideals, in the process straining his relationship with his son. In the beginning of the novel, when Pap visits Huck in his room, he expresses anger and frustration at the news of Huck being educated and changed into a sophisticated individual, instilling great fear into Huck. Moreover, Pap points to the lack of need of education and outright denies Huck from attending school ever again. Huck, still vacillating between his obligations to the two women who have tried to raise him into a civilized young man and Pap, retaliates to Pap's constraints on his freedom. Further in the story, when Pap forcefully takes Huck to his run down little place near the Mississippi River, once again through his dependence on brute force and oppression, Huck is forced to give in to the demands of his father, forming an image of an insane and unstable parental figure. 

          Due to his strained relationship with his father, Huck decides to take the reins in his own hands and set himself free of his Pap. Upon feigning his death, Huck sails down the Mississippi River, alone on a journey to live by himself. The image of a brutal and overpowering parental figure stays permanently in the mind of Huck, allowing him to assume a more independent role in life by learning to live by himself without any obligation to others in the world. Through the rest of the novel, we see how Huck's relationship with Pap, leaving him with nothing but painful memories of beatings, changes his opinion of the world by allowing him to find no alternative to the efforts of the women to civilize him and Pap to suppress his freedom. Huck is now left with no other alternative than living alone by himself. The introduction of Jim in the story further reinforces the opposition of Huck to the presence of a parental figure in his life. Despite of Jim's older age, Huck does not look at him as a protective parental figure. Rather, Huck considers Jim to be his companion on his journey through the Mississippi River, which is demonstrated by Huck and Jim helping each other survive in the wild.

          Through the portrayal of Pap as an oppressive and abusive parental figure who limits Huck's freedom and utilizes him merely as the end receiver of his actions, Mark Twain alludes to the development of Huck into an independent, self-sufficient, and mature adolescent capable of making his own decisions. The strained father-son relationship acts as a starting point for defining Huck's character and lending him his skills of cautiousness and cognizance of his surroundings to ensure his own safety in the face of any external threat. 

Yash Pandya

3 comments:

  1. i'm not sure you touched on all the points that are need in the intro? might wanna check your notes and i dont think the first sentence makes complete sense but that might just be me but otherwise good use of a quote and perfect scenario for it as well good start

    lots of retelling the story you might wanna try to tie it to the thesis better, remember the point of everything you say is to support your thesis just remember to tie everything back to the thesis, also might wanna check certain spots to make sure it makes sense some parts are slightly awkward ex: "Raised by a respectable family, Huck is under the care of two women who put their best efforts at work in order to change Huck into a civilized member of society."
    It might just be me but that doesn't sound right

    Also i know its hard to remember but ithink mrs. Holmes mentioned something about preferably wanting a quote from the novel even if its a simple one? but i might have to double check on that one

    Overall good points just tie them all together a little bit better but overall a great essay with many good arguments the only thing i would say if proofread hard because the flow is a little off i think and some areas are kinda awkward to read i would just double check

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  2. Your essay is really well written! You use specific textual evidence, which adds to your argument considerably and proves your point well. Your diction is also fantastic; your voice in this essay is mature, which makes the overall feeling of the essay informative and intelligent. This essay touches a lot on meaning, which is a great quality especially for AP English. It also gives the essay depth and makes it very intriguing and unique.
    The first two sentences in your introduction (including the quote) are well formulated; the quote is a really creative way to start the essay. While your thesis works as far as touching on all points in the question, I would try to condense it slightly, as it's a little bit confusing and I had to re-read it in order to fully grasp what the essay was going to be about. I As far as the body of your essay, you could consider editing out some of the plot summary (only leave what is necessary to make your points) and add some more commentary on what makes Pap they way he is (what are the roots of his personality?) because that is what leads to the conflict between him and Huck (as Huck is only a child). Overall though, your essay is very descriptive and interesting!

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  3. Nice essay. I had to read it twice and look up some words, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I thought you were a little verbose. For instance,while I thought your intentions were clear in your thesis, you could have accomplished the same thing with fewer words. Your characterization of pap's thoughts and intentions are well done and really help make this a good essay. A quote from the book would have been nice and the quote at the beginning probably should have been "We do the things we do because we care about you". I think the reader gets the same effect in a much simpler form. However, it was a great idea to start the essay with, because it really ties into your topic.

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